hey this story is AWESOME
the ending is funny starts back to how it began. thats clever.

Hahaha fantastic story!

xx
Ali

oh kara sounds interesting. so random!

This is seriously the most amazing story i have ever read.
Amazingly written.

Omg this story was somewhat crazy but awesome none the less. woo!

Hey! Just wanted to let you know that I LOVED this story. Kara's just such a lovable character because of her eccentricity and her inability to be self-conscious is such an admirable quality. I also loved Kara's random fact-spewing [I learned a lot actually haha] and Kara and Jay's love-hate relationship. Great job with this story! =]
Oh and can I just say that I love that you're from New Zealand? I even looked up New Zealand on wikipedia [haha a not very trustworthy site, I know, but it gets the job done] and it seems like such an awesome country. I wish I lived somewhere that cool. But anyways, I also liked all the Samoan stuff you implemented. There's actually quite a bit of Samoans at our school [our football team even does hakas (I think that's what you call them?)] and I loved learning more about Samoan culture.
Anyways this is getting to be a really long review so I'll shut up now. =]

This is so amazing...I can't stop reading...

anyways, i just want to say that somehow the jess and will thingy won't click with me... i know it will be jess and will, they are on the making but i have this nagging want to see will still wanting kara...

this story is in my faves! kara & jay r currently my fave couple their both unconventional but ur writing makes it work perfectly so keep up the good work ;) cnt wait to read deacon's story!

aw.. what a cute ending. haha.:D she threw a rock. haha:D love ur story.:D

im amazed

hahahahahaha...LOL...that deserves an applause :D

WOOT WOOT!! It's a story with the main chick being Samoan!! Finally! I just want to say that I'm half Samoan and proud and I have never read a story like this...You're bloody awesome!!

i have to say, this story is by far the most humorous i have read. :D i haven't even reached half and i'm already loving it. can't wait to read the rest :D

Just brilliant! I loved every bit of the story!
When kara's "logical" decision is to ignore jay, I was seriously wishing someone would just take her aside, shake the crazy talk out of her and then just throw her at the (tres hot) boy.
But it's ok... She sorted it out and all is right in the world...
It was all so adorable *sigh*
You are an absolutely brilliant writer. No joke.
:D

Ok I am loving this story more and more!
you just keep mentioning some of the things I'm really into like napolean dynamite ( I have a napolean pen that says the quotes from the movie when you push a button on it) AND FLIGHT OF THE CONCHORDS! I love bret and jemaine! I had a full on 'I love FOTC' conversation with this guy from New Zealand who I met in Prague on a night out on st patrick's day! Just brilliant.

So anyway, this chapter helped distract me from dentist pain/numb face so THANK YOU! Haha :)