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| Black and White Dreams 2007-06-24 ch 1, | omg. whoa. that just completely blew me away. the third stanza is my favorite. this whole poem is just completely amazing, for lack of a better word. just wow. I'm in complete awe. ~Black and White Dreams |
| kloun mannequin 2007-05-28 ch 1, | the chorus has a powerful meaning, the song rocks.. |
| nectar in a sieve 2007-03-26 ch 1, | (FINALLY! OMGZ!) this is... gah dude , gah. (yeah, tahts basically how illiterate i am right now) reading it with the formating as a poem, and then as a song, not paying attention to format, are two completely different things, and i have no idea how you managed to do that, but its awesome! (and yet more proof of your writing abilities) so many of these lines i want to quote back to you, and say- here's genius, here's genius, and laugh while my point is proved- you are a fantastic writer (idiot :p) frankly, i'd run out of room, and sound a little too repetitive- dumbstuck by the awesomeness of it. just... GAH. so friggin much of this is just plainly awesome. how do you not see it!? |