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Black and White Dreams
2007-06-24
ch 1,
omg. whoa.
that just completely blew me away.
the third stanza is my favorite.
this whole poem is just completely amazing,
for lack of a better word.
just wow. I'm in complete awe.

~Black and White Dreams
kloun mannequin
2007-05-28
ch 1,
the chorus has a powerful meaning, the song rocks..
nectar in a sieve
2007-03-26
ch 1,
(FINALLY!
OMGZ!)

this is... gah dude , gah.
(yeah, tahts basically how illiterate i am right now)

reading it with the formating as a poem, and then as a song, not paying attention to format, are two completely different things, and i have no idea how you managed to do that, but its awesome! (and yet more proof of your writing abilities)

so many of these lines i want to quote back to you,
and say-
here's genius,
here's genius,
and laugh while my point is proved-
you are a fantastic writer (idiot :p)

frankly, i'd run out of room,
and sound a little too repetitive-
dumbstuck by the awesomeness of it.

just...
GAH.
so friggin much of this is just plainly awesome.
how do you not see it!?
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