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Reviews For: The Line of the Knife

Elegant Raven
2007-06-25
ch 1,
I liked the other two I revied a lot more, but I'm giving you props for the fact that even though it's about the cutting scene, you did it with a little more... Pizzazz? I'm not sure of the word. This one also is too short. I'm guessing this is just one of those times in life where you feel like you're on the brink? From everything I've read so far, it looks like you're in to emo and punk. Interesting. You can really see your personality through your music.
sporkofdoom
2007-05-19
ch 1,
I liked the last two I reviewed a lot better. This one came off kind of like those 'Death, blood, misery, pain,' angstwhine pieces written by my gothic classmates in middle school, only a more eloquent version. So points for eloquence. But eh. Not a favorite.
nonamegiven
2007-03-30
ch 1,
I liked it a lot! :)
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