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Reviews For: We Were Just Kids

J.H. Fitzgerald
2007-03-28
ch 1,
abuseNot bad. I'm all for the nostalgic feel.

I'll make a recommendation, though. I would definitely shorten this piece, because no audience is going to stay tuned in to one person for that long, regardless of the quality.
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