Reviews for Invisible Children

Squeegee Beckenheim 2008-09-20 ch 1,	this is so true. no one cares about anyone but themselves anymore. good job.
aridelaine 2007-03-26 ch 1,	All and all this was good and I liked the message. There were a few spots where it sounded rough maybe because of the punctuation, ie the transition between the forth and fifth line because the comma makes you pause and it may flow better without the pause. But I really liked it. Keep writing!
Orual 2007-03-26 ch 1,	I'm not familiar with the movie you're referring to, but I think the message is very true. There's a percentage of children (teenagers, too) that slip through cracks, and few people seem to care. Good work, bringing this sort of thing to consciousness.
Shilpa 2007-03-26 ch 1,	This is one of the better poems on here. Others are composed in two seconds, and sound like they were written with no thought. Yet I love this poem... besutiful job: "We cry about our wants, And feel like, The world should care." Very true...