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| The Reverse Edge Blade 2007-04-18 ch 1,   | I liked it until you started using all those adjectives at the end, it got a little too much of it. Though I know how you felt, and how hard it is and how much aggression you feel, this wasn't the best way to put it. The Reverse Edge Blade |
| Lisa98 2007-04-02 ch 1, | wow! you tell him! we don't take no crap we don't take no crap from anybody |