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| thank you thoughtful 2008-07-06 ch 1,   | Oh, love, you want a review. "Down a sidewalk stream More than ripples A current Towards the drain..." You have yet to disappoint me. I like how you crush everything into such simple words. I can feel it all, a strong hard punch. |
| Hopeless-and-helpless01 2007-11-29 ch 1, | Should i dribble drabble on about how good this poem was...? Maybe. Or maybe I'll let it wash away like sand on the beach, that prescious sand casle, that happened to be you and me. Hehe, Some people may not have got it, but it was beautiful. I was kinda on the same track as the ast three lines throughout the whole of it. Like to say HELLO and well done tatsu, long time no read. Catch, Dani xoxo |
| Tytherpol 2007-05-05 ch 1, | This was so cool (except the last three lines were a little not really cliche, but basically). But i really loved it. The flow and connection and purpose. (the last three lines kinda just confused the meaning of it to me, that's what it is). But it's a good job. So good job. |
| Lady Kaede Blaise 2007-04-13 ch 1, | You're writing again *jumps up and down and claps hands*! I like this one alot, it has a really interesting repetitive quality. |