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| sam 2007-03-30 ch 1,  | Have you ever considered that those beings you see are ghosts? |
| Undrahas 2007-03-26 ch 1,  | wow. that seems horrible to go thourgh. i am afraid of the dark. sad for a 14 year old to say, but its true. I have to have someone like my grandmal or a stuffed animal like the bear my dad gave me when i was a little girl. i haven't even told my bff about this! idk y i am rambling on about this to u. i guess just hoping that you would be able to understand. etiher that or i am like u and i need sleep! u didn't really frighten me, but in a since i pictured the thing with eye sockets, a black abyss of nothingness that is to be the body, and nothing more than that. it looks frighting, and its vivid in my imaganation! i will leave this really long review. sorry ofr ambling on like this. |
| leylakedi 2007-03-26 ch 1, | are you serious about this? because if you are, I'm impressed that you still retain enough sanity to write it down...and if you're not being serious I must applaud you on your superb writing skills. I really, REALLY enjoyed reading this. I'm sorry that I can't identify with your fear (real or imaginary), but as I was reading I wished I could know the feeling you were writing about. Incredibly creepy. Incredibly good. I was transfixed, literally. Please write more things like this; if this is really from your own experience, then I hope you have other interesting things to share with the world because I will certainly be looking to read more. but please don't actually become insane...that would be a great loss for the world of literature. |