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| I Murder on Impulse 2008-10-05 ch 31,   | Fantastic story! xx |
| Amaryllis Faye 2008-07-06 ch 31, | if riley and jason dont end up married in the sequel i swear to God I hope you lose all your fans. and please dont make them sleep with other people in the sequel - it would totally screw up the whole chemistry. thanks for writing this though, take care! |
| Chance on Romance 2008-03-22 ch 1, | nice. sibling squabble! |
| anonomoose2 2008-01-12 ch 31, | I loved this story. If you were thinking of doing a sequal, you could make it a few years later, as if they had moved on, but un the end Jason and Riley do get back together. |
| random 2008-01-11 ch 17, | It seems a bit weird that this'grandfather keeps getting beaten up/in fights...are grandfathers supposed to be old? isn't it illegal to abuse the elderly...love the story tho...just a thought of mine. |
| tanya2byour21 2008-01-08 ch 31, | Oh you have to write a the third one. I love this serise and so can't wait to find out what is going to happen with Jason and Riley. Please write it if you have not already started it. Tanya |
| Lochi 2008-01-05 ch 31, | MAN YOU GOT ME SO EMOTIONAL READING THE EPILOGUE...WHY WASN'T IT A HAPPY ENDING? wHY COULDN'T SHE LOVE HIM AS WELL...i HOPE TZHERE IS THE SEQUEL LIKE YOU'RE SAYING =) |
| sleepiedreamer 2008-01-05 ch 31, | awss... that's kinda sad he didn't call! Can't wait to read your sequel.. I'm glad Riley's with her friends atleast and Jason has Paul. For the sequel you are going to add a brief summary of what happened inbetween right? CAn't wait to read more! GREAT JOB! AND I LOVE THAT TITLE! Sounds awesome and fits in with the other titles, with a flow hehehes =) |
| Lochi 2008-01-05 ch 19, | good chapter again. I love the chemistry between them, it's bringing a stupid smile on my face lol |
| Lochi 2008-01-05 ch 16, | oh I'm curious what she bought him =) Good chapter as usually =) |
| Lochi 2008-01-05 ch 11, | I was listening to the song Change the whole time, real good song and pretty good chapter. Jason being drunk and other stuff? noo he'd sounded so perfect so far =) |
| Lochi 2008-01-05 ch 7, | good chapter. The play seems interesting, just coppying their lifes huh. Can't wait for more :) |
| Lochi 2008-01-05 ch 5, | Like this story =) Noah must be a good bro and Jason kissed her? wow can't wait for more. =) |
| Lochi 2008-01-05 ch 3, | hi, I've read the first story, Shoulda woulda coulda and now I began reading this and I love it so far. I wonder what's wrong with Rye. She's ill or something I guess =( Ok, I'm going to read the rest =) |
| super girl 2008-01-05 ch 31, | Why! I thought Riley loved Jason too. Why couldn't she say it back? This chapter is so sad... |