True, I haven't seen anyone use this device in such a plot. >=D

I'd love to see how this will go.

i like the beginning and how you started with the quotes. it was very engaging =]

Extremely well-written, Hitomi! I could tell that your feelings were trying to jump off the page... and that is a very good thing, one to be proud of.

Great story and originality! ;D

For a prologue, it got me instantly hooked!

i love your writing style - it's so confident. also, the story is really original. i hope you can update soon!