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| Moondog Dozier 2007-03-27 ch 1,   | Marvelously visual and amazingly descriptive. This captures the scene, and holds it tight for the reader to clearly view. Very poignant and moving. Excellent work. |
| in a jar pk 2007-03-27 ch 1, | 'a lone tabby cat stalks a fieldmouse into eternity...' what a beautiful line. i loved this. x |