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| Vixen of Vienna 2008-02-29 ch 2, | Ah, interesting? You see, I am not a huge, huge fan of fantasy. It may take me a while to get into your story, but I am sure you have some master plot all figured out. Unusual to have a half-demon, half-angel child. If there was not anything more lined up, I would just write a story around that concept. Bending time? Oh, this will toy with my physics nicely. Haha. Sad about Nathan. And three centuries later? Well, please write more. There are a lot of unanswered questions. And thank you for your review. |
| Carmel March 2007-05-29 ch 2, | This chapter gave me a warm, fuzzy feeling. I loved it :) You've got strong, realistic, and likable characters. Excellent dialogue. A sufficient amount of description. You've also got that whole supernatural aspect going for you. Good job on this, and I can't wait for more! ~carm~ |
| Carmel March 2007-05-05 ch 1, | An excellent start to the story :) I love the storyline and the idea of it all, and your writing is wonderful. Hope to see more soon! ~carm~ |
| Shadowed and Shattered 2007-04-01 ch 1, | I love this story, even though I've said that before. I review even if I've read it. I haven't read the next chapter yet, as I had to get off the computer. I'm going to read it soon, and then I'll send it back to you. Still love this story. I enjoy repeating myself. Hm... I should work on that. |