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| XSpiderMonkeyX 2008-11-06 ch 25, | I LOVED THE STORY. I couldn't stop reading. Your a fantastic writer, amazing =) |
| danielle503 2008-10-14 ch 25, | I just found this story and I have to say I love it. It made me cry at the end but this one of my favorite story on fictionpress. |
| princessbig232 2008-08-18 ch 25, | This book is truly amazing. I love the emotion and love you put into you book. Well done, good luck with the future, A lifelong fan, Princessbig232 x |
| reader 2008-08-11 ch 25, | Aw, that was incredibly sweet. I loved this ending. :) I'd probably comment more if it were some other time but it's four in the morning, and I'm exhausted. But me staying up to four is a testament to the fantastic-ness that is your story. ^_^ |
| reader 2008-08-11 ch 20, | This is a most wonderful story, and I can't believe I haven't reviewed yet, but that's probably because I was way to absorbed in the story to do so earlier. I love Kennedy's character and how things are based around her and her past, which we don't discover until later. It's a lovely composition. Now that I think about it, I don't feel like we have much development on Harrison (or any of the other guys, but I don't care about them so much)...it's just that I feel like those guys are only there to support her. Which is incredible sweet and romantic and wonderful to read, but now that I think about it, it would be nice to see how she changed THEM, too. That's not very evident because the reader doesn't really have much insight into their backgrounds other that they are rich and neglected children who have formed a strong brotherhood together. In any case, I adore your story. Thanks so much for posting it! |
| belle1220 2008-07-25 ch 25, | I just read this whole story tonight and all I have to say is that I will definitely be waking up with puffy eyes tomorrow. The writing was so wonderful and the way you handled everything from the romance between Harrison and Kennedy to Kennedy's past and Peters death was brilliant. I am completely in love with this story. Wonderful, wonderful job. |
| Amaryllis Faye 2008-06-26 ch 1, | ...i am still struck speechless and trying to think of how to best put my thoughts into words. you made me cry. i hate you. lol. I've always hated to cry after reading sappy stories, but this one is just so incredibly beautiful. i wish i had written this. i hope i'll be able to write something like this. you're an amazing writer. thank you for posting this here and allowing me a glimpse of your oceanic talents. i hope to read more of your writing. take care, amaryllis |
| Muffins 2008-06-18 ch 25, | I absolutly loved it it was amazing and you should totaly write a sequal about their kids. that would be greatly amazing. Good job on finishing this I know how hard it is to finish stories. Best of luck with your new one and I hope that it turns out as good as this one. |
| Alicia 2008-06-09 ch 25, | Hey I greatly enjoyed reading your story, especially with the character development and how Kennedy always retains that sarcasm in her regardless whether or not she's all dark and twisty or just ordinary. :D Keeps her constant! I also did like how the focus of the story wasn't placed entirely on the romance, but alot on the characters, on the history, and on the actual plot. I think you could have ended by writing out what kennedy did say to nathan though, you know, so it goes full circle. But regardless, even without it ended wonderfully. (: Oh i forgot to mention that i also liked how Spencer and Emma weren't completely happy and still together because its more realistic and gives that difference from an archetypal happy romance fiction. I LIKED IT VERY MUCH! |
| Stahlut 2008-06-06 ch 25, | That was really good, I got pretty teary eyed. I'm glad you finally wrote the epilogue, it was a really good conclusion to a great story, so well done. |
| Monica 2008-05-30 ch 25, | loved it! i couldn't stop reading it. =] great job. |
| love that's leaving 2008-05-30 ch 25, | Well, I liked the epilogue. The note from Nate was very sweet. And I do like how you kept it realistic, though it was sad. Anyways, great job. Cheers, timshel |
| Only4Miken 2008-05-29 ch 25, | I loved this story. I just had to keep reading it and now im upset the its done with. |
| Essevera 2008-05-28 ch 25, | nice epilogue. it was really good. :) |
| Oooh.Look.A Cat 2008-05-27 ch 25, | oh i don't care how disappointing you think it is a tear or two actually fell so be proud =] ohh the memories i love this story so so much you did a great job i shall be looking out for more from you izzie |