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| belle1220 2008-11-03 ch 8, | I'm liking this story so far. It has a different feel than the other two. It's suspenseful. Anyway, I hope you eventually come back to this series and this story. I'm really hoping for a Zeke/Cassie story eventually. |
| PJC Macall 2008-10-30 ch 8, | LOVE IT PLZ continue!! |
| WesternPrincess 2008-08-28 ch 8, | Once again, I really enjoyed reading everything so far. |
| Saved By Blood 2008-06-01 ch 1, | Just wanted to let you know I'm buying your book when it comes out. I read it on this site when I was... fourteen? Or fifteen? And I loved it. Absolutely. I got in a lot of trouble because I stayed up till dawn to finish it, but it was so worth it. I was sad when I saw you'd taken it down, but then I learned you were publishing it (congratulations!!). On the Wings was my favorite story on this site, and I can't wait till it comes out! About this story, though, I read it the first time you put it up, two years ago? I'm glad you rewrote it, because I remember it not being as good as Love Lessons, but I don't remember why. Don't get me wrong, it was still great. Isaiah just got on my nerves a lot. I haven't had the time to read this yet. I'm older than I was before, and I have work and school and sports and blech, so I'm busier. I just wanted to congratulate you on your accomplishment and tell you I've been reading your stories longer than I've been a member of this site. This turned out a lot longer than I'd wanted it to be, but I hope you still take the time to read it. You're a great writer! |
| collegestudent 2007-12-05 ch 8, | Update please? :) I loved Tara's "impudent grin" and farewell to Isaiah...she can still lightheartedly tease him in spite of everything she's going through. I'm glad she opened up to him about what happened, but he should probably try to get more info from her. |
| Kylie1403 2007-09-26 ch 8, | o0o0o0o i like how they are growing close rtogether but not really realising it |
| violin-lady13 2007-09-20 ch 6, | hey, i'm thrilled that you posted so soon! this was a scary chapter--the flower on the car seat is particularly chilling...can't wait for another chapter. is Isaiah going to move in with Tara to keep her safe? i wonder . . . nice job! |
| Ariana McKenzie 2007-09-17 ch 5, | Hello! Good to see you updating, as always. And I'm glad to see some stuff happening here! It's scary, and definitely a little heart-wrenching watching Isaiah be himself, but all in all it's coming along nicely! And I like the introduction of Kelly, it's good to see a woman with Ike who isn't a potential date or something. And she seems like a good character. Well, can't wait to see more! Hope you aren't too busy :) Good luck! -Ariana |
| violin-lady13 2007-09-17 ch 5, | awesome job! the flowers thing was good suspense. one thing, though--what with Tara's gnawing feelings and the repetition of the fact that the card was not signed, it is a little obvious that it wasn't Isaiah, and therefore must be the stalker. other than that, it's a really cool chapter, and i really enjoyed reading it! keep it up! looking forward to seeing the next installment (I'm in suspense!) --violingirl |
| collegestudent 2007-09-16 ch 5, | Yay! You updated! At first I thought I wouldn't like Kelly, but she sounds like she might turn out to be pretty nice...and she reiterated what everyone else has been trying to tell Isaiah about Tara. :) He really can't afford to be making Tara mad at him, so he'd better get his head on straight! Especially if Tara is in danger...leaving by herself could have been dangerous. |
| rehilaration 2007-09-16 ch 5, | Welcome back! I'm excited to see how this one ends! |
| Acta Sanctorum 2007-08-18 ch 4, | aww i think im going to cry from that chapter |
| Ariana McKenzie 2007-06-21 ch 4, | Ah! Sadness! I like them when they're together! Haha. Nice to see you back! I haven't been able to write in a long time either; my sister and her infant son moved in and I'm a full-time babysitter AND a full-time student. It's killer! Anyway, I like this chapter better as a whole, but Isaiah is making me frustrated with his silliness and uncooperativeness, if that's a word. So good chapter, hope to see you back soon! -Ariana |
| CYP 2007-05-21 ch 3, | I just started reading this! after the Love lessons story. I'm liking this story =) please update soon!! |
| Kylie1403 2007-05-16 ch 3, | i love thsi story i really doi but i havent been interested in this version i will admit only because i have read EVERY different edition you have done of it and im losing interest in reading the first few chapters over and over im sorry if its harsh i dont mean to be harsh |