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| Definition 2007-09-03 ch 1, | abuseWo :o - jawdrop- Really dark humour...this is so intense, so raw. I really enjoyed this :) |
| Hustle Rose 2007-05-06 ch 1, | abuseAmazing. Your representation of Paris Hilton and everything she embodies seems so true, but you do it without any hint of undue resentment or spite towards her, in fact Im not sure whether it's the man you write about who comes off worst. |
| Chidori Nadare 2007-04-18 ch 1, | abuseAmazing and interesting. I really get it. I'd probably rate it T. Awesome piece, though. Keep writing! Thank you for your reviews. :) |
| simpleplan13 2007-04-16 ch 1, | abuseI might rate this T instead of K+ I like this... the repition is great... I love the part about her breasts being like a 13 year old's Honestly... I don't see why people find her so attratctive, but anyhow.. great piece. |
| Stormer 2007-04-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is so cool. I admit I'm mildly the anti-Paris. I can imagine that some dude said this to you, "Oh man I wanna ** her!" or something, and this was the result. :) The places we take inspiration from...! I really like your writing! |
| hermione032192 2007-04-04 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. XD I loved the last line. Gave me a good laugh. ^_^ |
| Her Wishing Well 2007-04-02 ch 1, | abuseAmazingly written in raw detail |
| Aalagi 2007-04-01 ch 1, | abuseI love the comparisons. Such dark sensuality with such a figure. Some would do just as the poem says some would never touch anything close. And either way the poem is enjoyed. |
| no.peace.los.angeles 2007-03-31 ch 1, | abuseWow. Interesting piece. "love is ** up, like the shape of her limbs" - hahahaha, awesome. Paris Hilton needs to not exist sometimes. Well, ok, all the time. :D Keep writing! :) |
| sleeping Pisces 2007-03-30 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is hilarious. What really impresses me though is the fact you were able to put this together in such a clever way. The comments about her body throughout the poem cracked me up. Amazing work, I needed a laugh. |
| she smolders 2007-03-30 ch 1, | abuseThere's something horrifyingly beauty about this poem. I love this. |
| Crazyguy1990 2007-03-29 ch 1, | abuse*laughs breathlessly* Lol, this is so true. However, just a thing on rating, I'd probably rate it T at least so it doesn't get removed Good stuff, though :D |
| recycle rhymes 2007-03-27 ch 1, | abuse*falls over laughing*...that's hilarious. i love the way you used the word "**" - and the way you repeated how paris hilton's body looked like. beautiful in a sense...perhaps in a ** up way. |
| kloun doll 2007-03-27 ch 1, | abuseoh my gosh, paris hilton is a ** and this poem get in dark humor, yeah, it's good but scares me. |
| hardcore 2007-03-27 ch 1, | abuselove is ** up, like the shape of her limbs, so long, and tight. i adore that line! great work, all raw and urgent and intense. |