|Reviews for Warning Bells|
| Michael Panush 4/18/07 . chapter 1
That was okay. Shortness is often something to be admired in stories, but it needs to be a little bit longer. Give us some more of Jared's thoughts, his family, and make us care about him, so it surprises and shocks the reader when he meets his untimely demise.
| ArmedDoomMuffins 4/7/07 . chapter 1
I thought this was a pretty good story. It was a bit short though, even for a short story.