Reviews for The Maker of Destruction

esther finn
2007-03-27
ch 1,

i like this..

stalkerlesson101
2007-03-27
ch 1,

that was a very well written poem. it was very dark. personally as good as it was if it had a more extended vocabulary i think that would have helped. with a bigger vocabulary you can show the depth of your emotions in such an articulate way. at first the poem seemed a stereotypical goth poem but by the end the way you have it spilt up it is just like statement after statement that is yours but vague enough to make me feel like they are mine. Amazingly well written!

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