The format for this poem was perfect. The way it was spaced honestly gave me the visual effect of falling and of cascading down. This is wonderfully written and cast me into a dreamworld of my own as I read it. Very though provoking and very well-written. :]

♥P.D.

Wow, in some ways this poem is so simple with the short lines but then it surprised me because of how powerful the emotions were in it. Your Wendy is so real and I wish I could cure her pain. Take care.

I like how it seemed like just a bunch of rambling thoughts, because growing up can be confusing, and you conveyed that very well. I can definitely relate to this.

it made me smile.