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| Twilight Starr 2008-07-10 ch 1,   | Great job at expressing how time passes. Nice sequel. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Katie MacDonald 2008-06-28 ch 1, | Geeze lauren! i never knew how good you were at writting! you really should choose it as a career! You're VERY good at describing things! I really like i-watch and time! Keep it up! lol :P |
| lovefantasyworkreality 2008-02-17 ch 1, | Boy, is this one sad and slightly depressing. It is an interesting sequel, and also good because the reader is drawn into the boy's plight. |
| xx Twilight 2007-08-26 ch 1, | this is really good, i loved it :) |
| moonlight child 2007-07-09 ch 1, | heh...it's messed up cause i know exactly what he's going through now. someone being so close and yet so out of reach...it's really disheartening really, when you think about it. when you love someone and yet they don't know you do (or in my case, how much). and then they're still out of reach when they're so close, although mine is in the emotional sort. it makes you wonder why people always fall for the people who are most likely to hurt them in some way, even though the person might not even notice that they're doing it. wow this sounds so freaking philosophical. and my parents say that hoshi isn't worth anything. well she is. she made me get all freaking philosophical. |
| controv3rsyxx 2007-04-26 ch 1, | oh i love this.(: sad, but you brought out all the emotion and ev'rything really well. time really does make people change. i especially felt that the part about them being sixteen and seventeen, yet choosing their careers at such an age, was related to me because well, i'm right in the process of picking a career for myself now :( you brought out what i thought about! thank you. (: |
| ironicdeathx 2007-04-21 ch 1, | I absolutely love this sequel! Usually a lot of the sequels I read are horrible, but not this one! This one lives up to the name of I Watch! Brilliant I say! Absolutely brilliant. |
| Qzie 2007-04-04 ch 1, | That was really good. I was looking for the story when you said it was up, but I couldn't find it, and then here it is! ^^ But yeah, it was very awesome, I like it. It was sad, and you have to wonder what's going on with the girl that the speaker's in love with, and whether it has to do with her boyfriend. So yeah, awesome story. :) |