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| Krizzie Kurisaki 2007-03-28 ch 1,  | wow... the description of events is excellent and the drama was not too much nor too little. i'm a fan of your works! |
| Ivory Taint 2007-03-27 ch 1,  | -applause- Hell yes! This is what I'm talking about! I could feel you in this—you definitely enjoyed writing this. I am delighted because I just read an original, captivating, and beautifully eloquent work. You should be proud of this, William. It is excellent. It makes me wish I could write like that. And usually only published writers make me feel that way. Finish it soon. I can't wait to see what happens next. In fact, if you don't complete this, I will be deeply saddened. You don't want to sadden me, do you? :p As far as critiques, I am speechless. |