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leeland88 2008-07-11 ch 2,	abuseThe prologue of this story was the most confusing, but informative; sad, but funny; and, most of all, suspenseful. Truly well done, I'll definitely be reading this in the future.
KiraLove 2008-07-08 ch 36,	abuseHm... Very interesting addition. I can't wait to see what happens next!
BregoBeauty 2008-06-23 ch 36,	abuseExcellent last two chapters! I'm getting really slow at reading-reviewing. Yikes. I feel so bad for Meg, learning the truth about John the way she did. Yay for John not giving up. I can't wait to read the next chapter! :-D
KiraLove 2008-06-14 ch 35,	abuseHe hit her... Seriously? Why?! And he didn't even apoligize specifically about that... That makes me mad at him... Lying and hitting a girl is really bad... Hm. More soon? I can't decide whether I'm super mad at John or not.
teen101 2008-06-08 ch 35,	abusethat was so awesome! when's the nxt update? i can't wait!! gives me the thrills...lol!
BregoBeauty 2008-05-07 ch 34,	abuseAwesome chapter! Jonathan's world is really falling apart now! I hope Jim doesn't tell anyone because I don't think things would go so well for him. I do hope Jon comes clean to Meg about what's really going on. Please update soon! :-D
BregoBeauty 2008-04-20 ch 33,	abuseGreat chapter! My head is swimming with all the info! Wow. I can't wait to see how this all comes together! Keep up the excellent work! :-D
KiraLove 2008-04-15 ch 33,	abuseVery good, can't wait to see what will happen with Meg next!!
Arn 2008-03-15 ch 2,	abusePrty good from what I've seen, I like the concept at the prologue that your life is planned out for you the moment your born, though that idea has already been put up a long time ago. I liked the first chapter and descriptions, especially about the guy with the spit, which I thought was kinda amusing. I was a bit confused at the ending, maybe it's just me. I like.
BregoBeauty 2008-03-07 ch 32,	abuseWow, you weren't kidding about a lot happening in this chapter! I'm so sad that Zeke is dead, though I had a sneaking suspiscion that he would die. Johnathan really seems to be coming around to the good side (Yay!) and I do hope that he can use his love for Meg in order to save her from Aloysius and Gregor. I think if anyone could beat this kind of bloodline curse, it would be Meg and Johnathan. It must be horrible for him to know that his father killed his mother and Meg's mother and now just had Meg's grandfather killed. Poor John. Is Nate dead too or does it just seem like he is? It really seems to feel like he's dead, but then again John seems so focused on Zeke, that I'm not entirely sure. This was an excellent chapter, so keep up the brillant work and please, PLEASE update soon! :-D
BregoBeauty 2008-01-27 ch 31,	abuseSorry it took me so long to read this! I hate play week (I was the assistant producer). Wow, so John's mom knew Meg's mom? Neat twist! Another excellent chapter! I'd say more if I wasn't so exhausted. :-D Keep up the amazing work!
deartokyo 2008-01-26 ch 1,	abusesweet. definately reading more soon !
KiraLove 2007-11-28 ch 30,	abuseBeaut-ti-ful. You know, like Hades says it on Hercules. Not that I mean it that way. Oh well. Good chapter. Keep up the good work! --Kira Love
BregoBeauty 2007-11-26 ch 30,	abuseExcellent chapter! I'm at a loss for words. Yay for John and Meg! That's all I think of. Absolutely perfect for them! It fit the mood and everything! Keep up the incredibly amazing work! Please, please update soon! :)
BregoBeauty 2007-11-26 ch 29,	abuseIn response to your reply, I don't think Meg's revelation was too quick. I think it was perfect. She seemed to struggle with it a bit over the past few chapters and it really fit here. Now, for the new chapters! You'll have to forgive me for being slow--NaNoWriMo stole my soul and I have really fallen behind on my reading/reviewing. Once again, I am so impressed by your usage of imagery! It's absolutely fantastic! I love Jonathan's reaction! The pausing, the kind of like "Wait... what?" almost thoughts in his head, makes it appear as he almost didn't dare believe his luck and it just really fit his character. Not to mention how entertaining it was! I also love the interactions between him and Gregor where he's trying to not to behave like a teenager and be a reserved adult and not punch Gregor's lights out (Which Gregor seriously deserves!). Aww... so cute/sweet! The whole Meg and John part at the end. I really feel like I know these characters now. They feel like good friends and I really hope their relationship succeeds. Off to the next chapter now! :-D This one was fantastic!

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