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Reviews For: The Sadness of All Men

Nemonus
2007-04-15
ch 1,
I can't understand this, except to guess that math symbolizes an intellectual ideal that men, being still rather stone-age, do not understand. Your words are pretty but over-abstract. Rhythm's alright.
Torn Silver Moon
2007-03-28
ch 1,
Well, what's there to say? Another brilliant poem, Lan. You're really really talented...I've run out of ways to praise you, so just know I love it :D.
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