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| Anon. 2007-11-02 ch 4,  | lol bryan is going to go through a lot! he seems so scared ! |
| Anon. 2007-11-02 ch 3, | i have seen both wicked and oklahoma! and these songs actually fit into the whole story line! amazing |
| Anon. 2007-11-02 ch 2, | OMG!11 i feel so bad 4 martha! adam is such a jerk! |
| Anon. 2007-11-02 ch 1, | omg! ur first chap is so funy |
| Hiccups 2007-09-14 ch 8, | Wait... Emma is Emma? I mean... you are Emma? Awkward... I can't say anymore, except that I feel bad for Ryan. |
| Hiccups 2007-09-14 ch 7, | I knew he was gay. It was so obvious. And what is BTV? Is it like Bob Takes Keche? I thought the ending was a bit... A bit... Okay you know what your friends have issues please tell them to go to the psychaeatrist. The Story Was enjoyable! FYI:m I don't have the guts to read the sequel... |
| Hiccups 2007-09-14 ch 6, | Adam deserves this. Though I have to say that the scenario was pretty awesome. I feel bad for Brian. He should just move back to his old town. I thought the chapter was too short! Amazing~ |
| Hiccups 2007-09-14 ch 5, | I am sorry but Adam is starting to sound a bit, gay. He is straight though... right? I think Martha deserves a Better Man! Someone better looking and has more money that would indulge her in little things. Emma Bryan and Ryan threesome. WOW. And Adam should be able to say yes or no. I don't like Adam! He is like a player and starting to sound gay. Anyways... funny Chapter |
| Hiccups 2007-09-14 ch 4, | Wait! So is this play based on your friends? That is a bit awkward. No offense but, you have weird friends. And that Catherine and (now) Emma is getting on my nerves. Anyways its turning out really good. I am so reading 2 after this! |
| Hiccups 2007-09-14 ch 3, | I feel so bad for Martha T.T She should be with Adam not Emily! Emily is all over him like a snake. Ew! And the Catherine person is getting on my nerves. |
| Hiccups 2007-09-14 ch 2, | Emily is such a ** and Adam is such a player! Is like Adam that hot? I think I can picture him... Is he blonde? Is he like drop dead gorgeous? Sigh~ I might be in love... jk I still like MarthaxAdam! |
| Hiccups 2007-09-14 ch 1, | Aw. Love at first sight. It's a bit cliche but I |
| PadfootDavis 2007-06-23 ch 8,  | Haha, that was so funny! =D I completley and absolutley loved it. Awesome job! +Faves |
| BiggestFan123 2007-05-07 ch 8, | yello! i think it was entertaining and funny like whooaa~ oh well i enjoyed it and it was cool from your biggest fan!...123 Hi, I am going to add on to this. This is another person on the same review. Yes, weird I know!! I absolutely loved it! Wonderful job! ~Taylor~ |
| FreewayofFlight 2007-05-07 ch 8, | Wow, this play was really good! I knew there had to be a random gay guy somewhere in this story, and it turned out to be the lead male! This was priceless! |