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| zack matthews 2007-11-30 ch 1,  | Its all wonderful. such great truths revealed. but only a few understand. thank you for writting it, because it speaks so much. peace-zack |
| Hidden Sword of Truth 2007-03-30 ch 1,  | I think it was beautifully written. I loved it. I am going to add it to my favorites. Bless You! (TSP) |
| Guardrail 2007-03-29 ch 1, | I really like this piece. I found it to be very thought provoking and emotional. The line, "But pain only lasts as long as you let it" is especially true. The only way in which I found that it was a little lacking was in imagry. The writing could be a bit more metaphorical and powerful by using images and symbols. But a straightforeward message definately is not a bad thing. Overall, I really like this; it's really great to see an optimistic poem every once and a while on this sight. Amazing work as always! Great job and keep it up! |