you words have an amazing pattern to them. i loved it!

WOW. XD I like this. I usually don't like poems like this, but yes. Wow. *claps* I like the emotions~

Irony. I was listening to the A Perfect Circle song by the same name.

This piece gives a sense of delerium as I imagine your directions.. backwards, forwards, dip down.. it's a swirling dizziness, then suddenly it ends.. like a crash. I love it!

i am afraid of falling.


it has a nice effect
and matches well with the title.

nice imagery.. love the ending..

What I like most is that you never used the word "gravity" in the poem, but let the imagery of falling do that for you. The simple form and language keep the poem clear, which I appreciate. Good work.

interesting images. nice work.