I loved the last three. Angry and elegant.

The style annoyed me a bit at first, but it seems fitting like quotes ripped out of a book, or perhaps from life it's self.

My favorite was "idontknow", but they where all well written.

ahh cigarettes the stick of death. i like this.

Why is it that the ones we fall for, aren't really the 'right' ones? This is just amazing.

this is very good. I love the metaphor and the rhyming of addiction and infliction. Great job.

"as if i knew what love was & as if anyone knows how to even begin to understand it." - That's so true, I agree. I think I worry about the trivial too much too. I love love these pieces. :)

The old 'juliet and romeo' analogy always tugs at my heart.

The imagery in this is amazing.