|Reviews for affliction|
| Around.about 5/11/07 . chapter 7
I loved the last three. Angry and elegant.
The style annoyed me a bit at first, but it seems fitting like quotes ripped out of a book, or perhaps from life it's self.
My favorite was "idontknow", but they where all well written.
| Frosted Midnight 4/22/07 . chapter 1
ahh cigarettes the stick of death. i like this.
| she smolders 4/9/07 . chapter 5
Why is it that the ones we fall for, aren't really the 'right' ones? This is just amazing.
| b-U-b-TRUE 4/8/07 . chapter 1
this is very good. I love the metaphor and the rhyming of addiction and infliction. Great job.
| she smolders 3/30/07 . chapter 3
"as if i knew what love was & as if anyone knows how to even begin to understand it." - That's so true, I agree. I think I worry about the trivial too much too. I love love these pieces. :)
| she smolders 3/30/07 . chapter 2
The old 'juliet and romeo' analogy always tugs at my heart.
| she smolders 3/30/07 . chapter 1
The imagery in this is amazing.