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| Around.about 2007-05-11 ch 7,  | abuseI loved the last three. Angry and elegant. The style annoyed me a bit at first, but it seems fitting like quotes ripped out of a book, or perhaps from life it's self. My favorite was "idontknow", but they where all well written. |
| Frosted Midnight 2007-04-22 ch 1, | abuseahh cigarettes the stick of death. i like this. |
| she smolders 2007-04-09 ch 5, | abuseWhy is it that the ones we fall for, aren't really the 'right' ones? This is just amazing. |
| b-U-b-TRUE 2007-04-08 ch 1, | abusethis is very good. I love the metaphor and the rhyming of addiction and infliction. Great job. |
| she smolders 2007-03-30 ch 3, | abuse"as if i knew what love was & as if anyone knows how to even begin to understand it." -- That's so true, I agree. I think I worry about the trivial too much too. I love love these pieces. :) |
| she smolders 2007-03-30 ch 2, | abuseThe old 'juliet and romeo' analogy always tugs at my heart. |
| she smolders 2007-03-30 ch 1, | abuseThe imagery in this is amazing. |