I would have liked this ever so much better if there was some sort of...rythm...flow, I guess, and it was longer.

It was just ok for me, love. xD That was to make fun of Simon from American Idol. Heheh.

So sad. It truely is heartbreaking when people can't see that they are just fine the way they are. Great job as always.

Well done-touching, and with a real ring of truth.

Hope your friend gets better.

interesting...

Wow, I totally relate. My friend never really admitted it, but I think she had an eating dissorder. She recovered [thank God] but little things still come back. It is scary because you just can't convince them they are so beautiful, and don't need to be skinny [though usually they aren't overweight]. Wonderful poem, lots of emotion. God bless.

Ah, poignant poem. Sick world we live in. Well done piece, hope you're friend realizes s/he is okay as is.

-PQ