yay D was going through your profile and everything and this (along with many of your other poems) poem caught my attention. moreso this once since the summary was interesting. I loved this and the metaphor used. you're definitely very talented D

So true! I love how good you are at showing emotions and how good of a writer you are.

great

its very good.

Lovely job! Great metaphor, it's all very beautiful and touching. Keep it up.

-PQ

I loved how you used makeup as a metaphor. This was really beautiful. Hiding your pain behind a mask sometimes can hurt you even more. Great job.