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| kloun doll 2008-05-30 ch 1,  | abuseI agree with this poem, sometimes I love you means nothing and gestures mean everything. |
| NJ Is My Home 2008-02-17 ch 1, | abusethis is really cute..i've like that before |
| NoMoreWords 2007-12-10 ch 1, | abusethat gesture can be the hardest one to try and show, but whatever the result it's always worth it, powerful and means a lot to how i've felt recently |
| Blissfully Sarcastic 2007-12-08 ch 1, | abuseShort; cute. It's a little choppy, but a good overall read. |
| Gothic Spook 2007-11-16 ch 1, | abuseI love it. True for many in relationships. Definatly true for a past relationship of mine and the feelings that went with it. |
| multiples of six 2007-10-01 ch 1, | abuseI hate that feeling. =( Nicely expressed, though! |
| Kusje 2007-06-24 ch 1, | abuseThis was refreshing! :) I'm so sorry for not replying to your reviews! I wasn't able to really sit down and check anything for a month or so now. But thank you so much for reviewing my work! I really enjoy your work! |
| Krystal Garcia 2007-06-08 ch 1, | abuseAwesome poem. You took many ideas and put them into a small thought. Nice work. keep it up |
| roselilie 2007-05-20 ch 1, | abuseHey long time no see. Just thought i'd see how your poetry is going... I like the poem...its a little choppy in the fourth line. I'm glad you kept writing! ~K~ |
| QueenVixta 2007-05-15 ch 1, | abuseThis is really very beautiful, I really enjoyed reading it. Very well expressed. Sorry for the lack of reviews recently, real life is just so hectic right now. Great work as always! { V } |
| in a jar pk 2007-04-23 ch 1, | abusesuch a true feeling; not a want, more of a need. gorgeous. x |
| reiphil 2007-04-22 ch 1, | abuseI know how this feels exactly. Too bad however that the feeling doesn't last eh? Great work as usual. |
| Abysmal Tr3pidation 2007-04-21 ch 1, | abuseYou did an amazing job writing this... |
| temporality 2007-04-16 ch 1, | abuseAw! This was simple, but it meant so much. Great job! ~Cristina |
| myno 2007-04-04 ch 1, | abuseah, simpleplan. Still here, still writing--it is so good to know some things don't change! This poem holds the same lovely simplicity you've always had. It is interesting to me that you and Manuel enjoy each others' work so much because in some ways it seems to me that your style are opposite; his tends to be quite tied to clear formatting and uses such sophisticated and often complex language, while yours has this purity and freedom to it that is just beautiful. Someday I may return. Till then--it is good to drop a note again. I do still read your work, but rarely review. This poem is so accessible to me, so much like thoughts I've had so often lately. Well done. |