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| smile for the sunshine 2007-04-03 ch 1,   | That was really pretty. I like the different view point. I love the way that you used detail. Silver rains is such a creative name. Good job; it was a great poem. |
| xDancingintheRainx 2007-04-02 ch 1, | Wow. This is a truly beautiful piece. You descriptions are so graceful and lovely and the imagery was wonderful. I really like this piece and I think you did an excellent job! Thanks for the review! |
| DOORphrame 2007-03-30 ch 1, | I think stanza breaks would help the flow better, so it’s easier to read. I loved the imagery though, and how it suddenly switched from a description of the rain to a utopian ideal. It’s a really odd comparison, yet it works really well. |
| Comawhite13 2007-03-29 ch 1, | This is pretty good. I like the line about the trees strung with pearls. |