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| sk8rgrl 2007-04-09 ch 1,  | I'm not sure if something should be put at the beginning in the spaces or not. Like, you could, and have it be a more complete picture of what the girl in the poem has gone through. But then again, leaving it the way it is allows the reader to place their own trails and experience into the beginning and perhaps relate more to the girl? idk. I do love the last four lines though, that's brilliant. I'd never thought of a victory being empty before, but it makes so much sense. WOW! ~sk8rgrl |