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| purple x pen 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abusebeautiful! welcome to my favourite's list =) |
| Koriina 2007-06-12 ch 1, | abuseWow . . . that's a hauntingly tragic, eloquent piece you've got there . . . The word choice is amazing, and the picture is surreal in a way that leaves your heart pounding, and aching for more . . . Great job. =) |
| xDancingintheRainx 2007-05-04 ch 1, | abuseI love this. Especially the last few lines. Its so beautiful and elegant but sort of haunting too. Excellent work! I'm adding this to my favorites! |
| je suis une pomme du terre. 2007-03-30 ch 1, | abuseNice ^.^ I love the words in parentheses. Seems like an annoying inner-thoughts type thing XD Hmm... don't worry, things will get better. There's hope on the horizon!! xDD lol that was corny... anyway, I really like what you wrote about how she was dead while she was alive. Nice oxymoron. It works great ~> mwah |
| Taltush/MeiMei 2007-03-28 ch 1, | abuseThis is really elegant (flowing) and in a sense is also disorienting. It's a nice combo. Everything feels pretty but sort of strange and different at the same time. Great job. |