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| WyrdWolf 2007-03-28 ch 1,   | I love the first part of the first line, 'Many things of loss I have come across' it had a very neat rhyme that was subtle and cool. For a short poem, it converys a good sense of style and substance. And the ending was cool, too. Wolfie p.s. I talked to Jack today. The golf course opens next weekend. |
| Taltush/MeiMei 2007-03-28 ch 1, | Even though it felt more like sentences arranged in an interesting format, I like it. I like the format (though it is a bit strange) and I especially like the ending. The last line is cute. |