Reviews for Killer Instinct - FictionPress.com

cometwriter 2008-04-08 ch 1,	I give you a 6.5/10 sorry I know I'm being pretty frank here. The thing is the way you're describing everything. You defintely need to work on making your descriptions flow with the story instead of sticking out. Also the way it's like divided into parts dosn't really work well. So I'm really just being honest. Hey out of curiosity do you know of a way to just get a random story or poem to come up? I'm new here.
symbiotic 2007-04-14 ch 1,	Nice beginning. Hope there is more to it.
Heart Of The Moon 2007-03-31 ch 1,	Nice. I've said it before, will say it again. Well done!I love Akane, she's so interesting and cold