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Reviews For: Tokyo AMOR

RPGmastar
2007-04-22
ch 1,
abuseQuestion: Is Koji in this? Email me back.
FugitiveGirl
2007-03-31
ch 1,
abuseI kinda wanna know more about Shadow.. The dialogue between Shadow and Asuna seems a bit stiff to me, I think you need to put something to differentiate between Asuna and Shadow's speech. Something like dialect, or an accent would do it. =) Looking forward to your next chapter.
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