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| Red Tears Black Wings 2007-05-14 ch 1, | Well done this is very good. I like this very much really powerful! ~Mandy |
| bangbangstartagain 2007-03-29 ch 1, | it was great. it flowed really well and had a sense of desperation all the way throught right to the end where it comes to a peak in: 1, 2, 3, please, let me breath. its like a plea. and my fave phrase would be: Is the red cup, half empty or half full? Why stress when I can use the tap? Pull and push it back good work. loved it :) |