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Red Tears Black Wings
2007-05-14
ch 1,
Well done this is very good. I like this very much really powerful!

~Mandy
bangbangstartagain
2007-03-29
ch 1,
it was great. it flowed really well and had a sense of desperation all the way throught right to the end where it comes to a peak in: 1, 2, 3, please, let me breath. its like a plea. and my fave phrase would be:


Is the red cup, half empty or half full?

Why stress when I can use the tap?

Pull and push it back


good work. loved it :)
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