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| DarkBlysse 2007-05-30 ch 1,   | Great poem! I've just got one qualm with it. "An oh so impossible dream"--There should be a comma after 'oh.' |
| Faithless Juliet 2007-04-03 ch 1, | I can really relate the the beginning of this piece - the subject of being swept away by ones own imagination. I can really relate to that. Keep up the good work. Much love, Juliet. |