|Reviews for Cold Blooded|
| Guest 7/10/12 . chapter 23
Oh, come on, you can't just update only to leave it at another cliffhanger! ;-;
| Eun Ai Hoshi 12/13/09 . chapter 22
Wow. Hisa is not weak. Man it takes a lot of guts to kiss the guy you like, imagine how much more courage it takes to kiss the guy...you don't like, in the way I mean. The plus side is of course that Yuu likes her _ What can I say? I really enjoyed this chapter. But I enjoyed the end a little (okay a lot) more than the beginning. It had tension, suspense, and this strong turmoil emotion that you really illustrated out very well! I could vividly envisage the garbled expressions of both Hisa and Yuu. Marvelous chapter! I can't wait for your next update! :)
| Lunaira 9/25/09 . chapter 22
(Stupid FP won't let me log in. BAW)
Wow, it's been a long time since you updated this story, but at least the update was worth waiting for! XD; I liked it, and I'll wait patiently for you next update, again
| Lunaira 1/15/09 . chapter 21
This is really good so far! I patiently await your next update
| Lunaira 1/14/09 . chapter 19
VAMPIRE KNIGHT IS FOR THE WIN! I love Still Doll and Suna no O-shiro
Anyways, I love your story so far. I'll read the rest of it tomorrow.
| Nemjiro 7/5/08 . chapter 20
Me like! I like, I like it! Keep it up and update soon..Peace.
Make yourself comfortable by reading some of my works.
| Eun Ai Hoshi 7/5/08 . chapter 21
No! Don't hate Isao(to the reviewer below _) He's so darn cool! And handsome...and caring...protective...T_T don't hate him...
But then you of course have your own prized opinions, so _ you can carry it own for now-but not forever, heh, :) Hopefully in the future chapters, your opinion of Isao may change.
Now onto the main review (sorry..I just had to say something about Isao.._'): This chapter was GREAT again! First to list off - I love the way you showed Yuu's perspective of turmoiled feelings and then had a similiar situation from Akako. I liked the little moment between my fav couple-even though it was tiny. I like how everything is still dark and complex but doesn't leave you completely in blindness. There are strong emotions, doubts, secrets for sure-I can't wait till you shower us with all the great surprises in store. Awesome job. Keep it up! :)
| SimplyFae 7/5/08 . chapter 21
aw, poor yuu, poor akako. both rejected and trying to move on... but i wonder why akihito (sp?) hates isao so much.. Love the story!
| xEutopiax 7/2/08 . chapter 21
That was totally and undeniably adorable! Though I can say that I might actually be starting to dislike June a little more than before, I really liked how you protrayed Akako in this chapter.
It was refreshing and unusual [for her] and readers will understand her more, because lets face it...almost everyone has gone through a one-sided love before.
Also, I love how you kept Isao in character. I mean you had him seem to keep his cool but his voice was guilty, that sounds so like him!
Terrific work! I LOVED it!
| xEutopiax 6/22/08 . chapter 20
Woah, okay. I don't like her so far, June I mean. But I thought the fight seen was pretty cool. Well, Hisa may have finally met her match, or not...if she really is determined to using her full potential that is.
Ha-ha, I feel bad for Yuu. Having the attention of a girl you don't like but the one he does like literally running away from him. God that must suck, like big time.
I wonder if June is here to save Yuu's dad, maybe she's on like an opposite Academy or orginazation or something. Ha-ha, that would actually be pretty cool, in a creepy sorta way. LoL, conspiracy!
Terrific chapter, I loved every moment of it!
| Eun Ai Hoshi 6/20/08 . chapter 20
June is Korean? Interesting. This chapter was completely anime-style. I haven't watched any anime in almost 1 year, but I still recall those girls who'd have instant mood swings-having appeared out of the blue sky-suddenly going after the main lead. June completely portrayed that image vividly here. This chapter was good, but I wish Isao was here! _ But of course I can understand how he can't be there in every single scene, lol (though I'd love tht) anyways, hope he plays some major role in the whole outcome of the story-and really really really hope there are loads of Isao-Hisa moments to look forward too. :D
Sincerely, in my opinion, I don't think you should bother with re-wrting the earlier chapters. I can totally relate to that emotion of wanting to re-write something after reading it after a few months, but I think the most important factor is we want the story to get going. Maybe after you complete the entire story you may want to consider. But if you re-write the chapters now won't it halt the process for new chapters coming into the story? If not, then awesome! But if yes, please consider. From my perspective, you're writing style has improved to great degrees. I'm completely stunned by it. I admire it a lot more. However your earlier writing was not bad either. It was enjoyable, readable, intense, and completely brilliant. So, yes, this is just my opinion and suggestion as a fellow reader. :D.
Can't wait to see what's in store for us, readers, next! Great job! :D
| xEutopiax 5/30/08 . chapter 19
Terrific chapter! It was refreshing to hear the story from Isao's point of view, I quite liked it. Ha-ha, him as a teacher at a regular school with all the girls and female teachers swooning over him, lol. It would be soo funny if Hisa got jealous.
But she probably wouldn't, not the type. Anywhoo! I loved this, like I love all you chapters!
Great Work! [cough-as always-cough]
) -Kaiyako K.
| Eun Ai Hoshi 5/27/08 . chapter 19
This made up a lot for the late update! Great chapter! I like Isao a lot myself too and to get an insight of his mind is just pure brilliance. Please update soon! I'm so glad you updated again. You created the atmosphere of the setting so realistically I could almost feel the silence, excitment, and curiosity within. Great job once again.
| Eun Ai Hoshi 4/29/08 . chapter 18
The story is getting interesting chapter by chapter! Update soon. The confession was brave of Yuu. But poor Hisa, it does put her in an awkward situation _
| xEutopiax 2/24/08 . chapter 18
I am back again with another review, I'm going to write this as I go along so please bare with me if I miss something. One thing that I can really commend you on is how you kept Hisa in character, instead of having her confess the whole Isao thing to Yuu, you actually have her say she would explain later.
The one thing I like about this chapter the very best (which is true with all your chapters, but in this one its the most important) that I can actually SEE it. I can see the way they act and I can understand why, it takes a great writer to do that and I am more than happy to tell you that you are better than great.
Akako and Akihito make me mad, LoL sorry for that random fact, but they do. Ugh, they burst my happy cloud! Haha
But it's so obvious he likes her, and if he was a little less twisted I would have wished that she would return his feelings. But he's not. So. Tough luck sicko! Ha-ha, that makes me feel oddly content. Childish no?
But still the ending was actually kind of cute, and it does make me want them to end up with eachother. Hope you continue this in the next chapter.