Reviews for Incomplete Lover - FictionPress.com

harumpha 2007-12-26 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis poem made me grin wryly. I love the "he's such and such but this and that." The contradictions helps with the imagery of the character in more depth. I especially admire how you were able to rhyme and yet keep the point of the poem there. Very nice; it shows an experienced writer. My favorite lines must have to be: "He tells you that he's single/ though he wears a wedding ring." Great job at capturing the ideal man with his imperfections that women tend to gloss over for the sake of their "true love". ^-^
emerald 2007-03-29 ch 1, anon.	abusewry smile Good job. Good characterization.
Ashelin 2007-03-28 ch 1,	abuseThis was sad, and it flowed really well. I loved how it wasn't really a story, but you didn't just bundle things together in a weird way. Great job.