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Reviews For: Incomplete Lover

harumpha
2007-12-26
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis poem made me grin wryly. I love the "he's such and such but this and that." The contradictions helps with the imagery of the character in more depth. I especially admire how you were able to rhyme and yet keep the point of the poem there. Very nice; it shows an experienced writer.

My favorite lines must have to be: "He tells you that he's single/ though he wears a wedding ring."

Great job at capturing the ideal man with his imperfections that women tend to gloss over for the sake of their "true love". ^-^
emerald
2007-03-29
ch 1, anon.
abuse*wry smile* Good job. Good characterization.
Ashelin
2007-03-28
ch 1,
abuseThis was sad, and it flowed really well. I loved how it wasn't really a story, but you didn't just bundle things together in a weird way. Great job.
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