Great work, best I've read in a while. Truly scary and brilliantly flowing with your use of rhyme. Wish there weree more like this!

I love the vivid imagery and symbolism. Great poem. I recommend it to everyone in literature. I dont quite know why this topic; the poet was probably b0r3d. :D Anyways, keep up the good work yue!

Wow... that was so deep. Gosh its so suspenseful. So whats after her anyways? Spirits/ghosts? You really creeped me out man... But I enjoyed it. Thrilling. 2 thumbs up!

~Chalyn~

Ooh a new poem, wee!