Reviews for Stripping You and Your Love

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Khalie Shields StrawberriiM... 2008-10-26 ch 27,	ok well this is not going to be a regular review because you know i think the quthor is a good writer well excellent to say the least but to let eric manipulate her mind like that he is such a pig nd i hope that she gets her memory back quick and wants nothing to do with him EVER
faithful.dream 2008-09-16 ch 35,	LOVES IT
faithful.dream 2008-09-14 ch 21,	omg, im only halfway through the story, but i love it already !
clear vision 2008-08-04 ch 1,	hm...interesting. so far, the only thing i have to say is about the writing. i know english isn't your first language but i don't think that detail would influence the depth of the writing (not mechanical, which, btw, there are a few errors but it's whatever). like, there are barely any details. where's the description? like of scenery and such. so far, there hasn't been any depth and is quite shallow. then again, it's only been the first chapter so we'll see.
katiemoon 2008-06-29 ch 27,	omygosh i hate eric weant to kill him but i love this story!
Isabella Fluduano 2008-06-27 ch 35,	I love this story! I finally finished it and I am going to immediately start on the sequel! The details are great and you can't stop reading it! I was gone for a week and all I could think about was what was going to be happening next in this story! I am happy I finished it though. It was a live changing story for me! I couldn't really find anything wrong with it. So keep doing the same thing with the sequel!
Kayla 2008-06-24 ch 4,	ugh..the story line is okay, but the grammar sucks..they eat cereal..not cereals...and its just too hard to read..too much bad grammar to ignore o_O
Abigail Night 2008-06-24 ch 1,	COOL! I like a lot, and no I'm not a perverted boy. Keep Writing!
Cinamonndsugar 2008-06-23 ch 1,	hey you have a really good plotline but you seriously need a BETA. i don't know if you have problems with the enlish language or if they're just typos, but you need someone who is familiar with the language to look it over.
What A Stupid Lamb 2008-06-14 ch 35,	i liked the ending cuz everything ended on a happy note (except for bitch2 and eric). can't wait for the sequel which i will start reading soon! Kattie
What A Stupid Lamb 2008-06-13 ch 27,	so i wasn't really planning on reviewing until the very last chapter, but i just HAD to review. OH MY GOD! I think that i'm going to kill Eric for being such a #! I wanna beat the ** out of him for putting those lies in kim's head! ugh!! this is SO frusturating, but i'll just have to bite my tounge and keep reading because there is no way in hell that i'm gonna stop now because of #-eric. i can't wait for kim to remember everything and beat the crap out of him. it's gonna be so awesome. Kattie
Isabella Fluduano 2008-06-11 ch 1,	I absolutely love this story! I get so caught up in this that I feel like I am Kim. Keep writing because whatever you are doing is great!
Chance on Romance 2008-06-03 ch 35,	interesting plot!
Gentle. Edge. 2008-05-11 ch 35,	Wow I never thought I would finish that story! Lol, you did such an awesome job. I was so totally hooked even though there were a few things that bothered me. Seeing as how I haven't really reviewed in a while, this is going to be a long one. Hope you don't mind xP I understand that English is a second language to you so I already have to congratulate you for creating this. There were a few mistake like messing up pronouns or misspelling words. (here's an example that kinda bugged me: you would say 'we' instead of 'us') Most of the time it didn't take much for me to decipher what you meant but other times I would stare at it and wonder what you were trying to say. But I have to admit that your writing got so much better throughout the story and by the 15th chapter (I think) I was totally hooked. Seriously, I tried to stop reading but every time I did I would go, "Ah! I need to find out what happens! I'll stop next chapter..." I didn't sleep until 2 AM yesterday because I had to find out if Jake found her or not. :P Anyways, you had a few paragraphs that you tended to drag things on. Most of them were interesting and I read whereas others bored me and I skipped. So if you ever decide to revise your story or something, these might be things you look out for. Things that I really just have to applaud on are your decisions of Jake and Kim. I loved how you didn't have Kim accept him after the accident and when she remembered everything. It ** me off, of course, but it added so much drama and I really like that.It was great to read too. And the whole thing with Eric lying? Wow, that was genius. I was reading it and you made me hate him so much! But then in the end you made everything better by showing the Eric we saw in the beginning of the story. That was truly genius. Okay, so I think I'm finished this review now. Lol. I hope I didn't hurt your feelings or something. I just figured that you might want to know (so please don't hate me!). :) P.S. If it makes you feel any better, this is the longest review I've ever written. :D
Gentle. Edge. 2008-05-09 ch 4,	One thing that has me a bit confused is that you said they live in an apartment? I thought they lived in an actual house since Jake's room was in the basement. You might want to clear that up if you ever have the chance.

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