Wow. I still cannot figure Jesse out at all. Which I love! I can't wait to find out more about him (and Matt, for that matter), but I love how the story builds and you don't just throw everything out on the table right from the beginning. Both Jesse and Matt are pretty unique characters. I like how Matt's a jerk. A lot of people say they love writing their characters as jerks but then the characters just turn out kind of...bitchy. Matt's actually a grade-A jerk. But still with obvious potential to change. I can't tell you how nice it is to read about imperfect, in-depth characters like these. And do I sense a bit of an unreliable narrator? Great story so far, I'll definitely be looking forward to the next update.

Only now nnoticed you'd updated :)

LOL that's certainly one way to ah reach resolution ;)

Man, that was great.
And your picture of Jesse is wonderful! Can't wait for the next chapter xD

Why oh why do you have to be so awesome? Your writing skills never cease to amaze me-- being able to push me on the verge of happy tears; and your characters have such quality and in depth traits that...that... leave me speechless. Enamored.

The whole chapter was perfect, the fight, the porn, the...ah, resolution part, they all were so fluid, so cohesive and RIGHT, that I just.loved.the magnificent.chapter.

Really, if I could get my hand on a book written by you, I would die happy.

Or maybe you could just marry me?

Hee. Thank you so much for updating! you really made my day. So sorry for the horrible english, take care!

Yay, Matt`s back!! I LOVED this chapter! I loved seeing Jesse all aggressive :p And it`s true, it`s harder to review porny chapters XD

I don`t like that Matt said the he could "settle" D: It makes me feel bad for Jesse, but I`m cheering for a change of heart ;)

lol
"Even though I’m pissed, and ashamed, I can’t help feel a little horny."

"This idea is sounding better and better, though I couldn’t really say why. I couldn’t even hazard a guess—I just feel excited. Excited, in such a subtle way that has my whole body humming and aware. A yes is hissing through my mind. I can’t stop the smile on my face, though I try to reign it in for fear that it will come across as more of a leer."

these quotes made me laugh

Phew. Wow.

Excuse me while I scrape myself back up off the floor.

Damn. With bells on.

I'm slightly incoherent right now.

Um, good chapter? (Understatement)

Please (I'm begging you) don't leave it too long before the next one.

Yay! You updated. That was...an interesting chapter. haha. I like his deformity...makes the character a lot more unique than regular characters and a lot more interesting. Gah! He's gonna settle? Well, that's okay. Roy doesn't seem interested and jesse did put Matt in his place. Lol. Matt's a total asshole. I swear

Cacaine is illegal in my state. Which stinks because I like the taste and its the only thing that gives me an energy boost.

nosebleed! HAWT! :o I'm blushing right now and struggling to function but must tell you that was and awesome chapter - omg! Who knew Jesse was such a minx! :D Well, at least now he's got some sort of an inclination as to why Mattie's acting like he is. I hope they get more action on in the next chapter and possibly a confrontation? :D Looking forward to an update!! :D

Sweet chapter! I so want to know what is going on with Roy! He's just so mysterious right now! It's like there's something going on with him and every character and sometimes he seems like he could be gay and then not and ah!
Also, I'm stoked to see how this new development between Jesse and Matt changes things! Awesome!

I love Jesse.

I love a lot of Jesse's. Maybe it is a sign that I am going to fall in love with a Jesse. I doubt it though.

But seriously... I love him.

Ahh, I seriously love this story.
And I want to find out what's up with Jesse.
So update soon :) !

arg arg arg!
i cannot believe that you haven't updated this story since FEBRUARY! why? it's frikkin hilarious and addicting as hell! and probably my favorite story on fictionpress - i absolutely adore this fic! please, please continue/finish this fic!
-zozo

I really want to know what happens next, it's killing me!
I really want to know Jesse's past (I think everyone does...:P) Your writing is fabulous, and the revelation at the end of this chapter was so AWESOME. maybe I'm a sadist.
please update soon... Keep up the great work! :D
(wow, that review was barely coherent... My point is, THIS STORY IS AWESOME AND I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT YAY. Not very constructive, but. It gets the point across. or something. indecisive man strikes again.)