Hot. I wonder if Jesse got in a car accident or something… trusting as he is I don't think someone did this to him. Also I was glad when the drug addict theory was quickly replaced with hospital theory, it's a good chance to have teenage characters think instead on just going for the more illegal reason. Also I like your characters, how nice Roy is to everyone (did he get Jesse to hang with them to hook him up with Mat now I wonder, after all the thing that made him got to the new boy was the rumor that he is gay, if he figured out that Matt has a crush on him and he already felt guilty for dating Tara it might be is way of redeeming himself).

I haven't seen this story in ever, but it's still as amazing as ever.

And no, I'm not just reviewing 'cause the boys got freaky with each other. But, haha, I like it. It was hot, yeah, but it was also revealing. I always thought of Jesse as a kinda... eh... bottom. You know? But now, haha, I can totally imagine him 'taking advantage' of Matt.

Hehe. Yes. Hehe.

oh poor Matt, I totally did not see that happening

Matt is such an ass, but I'll probably love him by the end of the story, hehe

Ahh this was so good! Update soon please!

Wow. I still cannot figure Jesse out at all. Which I love! I can't wait to find out more about him (and Matt, for that matter), but I love how the story builds and you don't just throw everything out on the table right from the beginning. Both Jesse and Matt are pretty unique characters. I like how Matt's a jerk. A lot of people say they love writing their characters as jerks but then the characters just turn out kind of...bitchy. Matt's actually a grade-A jerk. But still with obvious potential to change. I can't tell you how nice it is to read about imperfect, in-depth characters like these. And do I sense a bit of an unreliable narrator? Great story so far, I'll definitely be looking forward to the next update.

Only now nnoticed you'd updated :)

LOL that's certainly one way to ah reach resolution ;)

Man, that was great.
And your picture of Jesse is wonderful! Can't wait for the next chapter xD

Why oh why do you have to be so awesome? Your writing skills never cease to amaze me-- being able to push me on the verge of happy tears; and your characters have such quality and in depth traits that...that... leave me speechless. Enamored.

The whole chapter was perfect, the fight, the porn, the...ah, resolution part, they all were so fluid, so cohesive and RIGHT, that I just.loved.the magnificent.chapter.

Really, if I could get my hand on a book written by you, I would die happy.

Or maybe you could just marry me?

Hee. Thank you so much for updating! you really made my day. So sorry for the horrible english, take care!

Yay, Matt`s back!! I LOVED this chapter! I loved seeing Jesse all aggressive :p And it`s true, it`s harder to review porny chapters XD

I don`t like that Matt said the he could "settle" D: It makes me feel bad for Jesse, but I`m cheering for a change of heart ;)

lol
"Even though I’m pissed, and ashamed, I can’t help feel a little horny."

"This idea is sounding better and better, though I couldn’t really say why. I couldn’t even hazard a guess—I just feel excited. Excited, in such a subtle way that has my whole body humming and aware. A yes is hissing through my mind. I can’t stop the smile on my face, though I try to reign it in for fear that it will come across as more of a leer."

these quotes made me laugh

Phew. Wow.

Excuse me while I scrape myself back up off the floor.

Damn. With bells on.

I'm slightly incoherent right now.

Um, good chapter? (Understatement)

Please (I'm begging you) don't leave it too long before the next one.

Yay! You updated. That was...an interesting chapter. haha. I like his deformity...makes the character a lot more unique than regular characters and a lot more interesting. Gah! He's gonna settle? Well, that's okay. Roy doesn't seem interested and jesse did put Matt in his place. Lol. Matt's a total asshole. I swear

Cacaine is illegal in my state. Which stinks because I like the taste and its the only thing that gives me an energy boost.

nosebleed! HAWT! :o I'm blushing right now and struggling to function but must tell you that was and awesome chapter - omg! Who knew Jesse was such a minx! :D Well, at least now he's got some sort of an inclination as to why Mattie's acting like he is. I hope they get more action on in the next chapter and possibly a confrontation? :D Looking forward to an update!! :D