This isn't finished is it?! I hope there is more, or I hope you come back to write more soon :) So good! All your stories are! I love love love love love this, matt and Jesse are just SO cute :D

I've read your story three times now and I'm dying for the next chapter... I've officially died now... I will only revive with new chapters _ :P, Plz post more!

PLEASE FINISH THIS I'M ADDICTED

NOOOOOO! IT CAN'T END THERE! PLEASE COME BACK ALIVE AND UPDATE!

eep what happens next! Update plz

Gawd... *Drools* Pleasepleaseplease update soooooon!

OMG WHERES THE REST? *sits there and looks stubbon demanding more* so addictive :D really well written :) and and and ah that was brilliant. Please update! :) x

Gaah you need to finish this series too! Its really good _ !

I can't wait to see how it all works out between Matt, Jessie and Roy :3

-DxH

Please oh please oh please update this story I absolutely love it and am now deperate to we how this story will progress.

Really this story is awesome, therefore the only logical thing to do is continue writing it... Haha n_n

Oh my- that's teenage boys for you, I suppose. Glad they 'resolved' things for a time... can't wait to see the next part!

hey. You really should continue this story. I'm addicted. I love it. You REALLY should continue. Please!

I love this one, I always come back to it when I want to see crossed wires and adolescent turmoil. Bravo, I'd love to see more. : )

I'm so saddened by this chapter.

Don't get me wrong, it's awesome (and SO, SO HOT) but you posted this chapter *over a year ago*. AGH and this always happens to me too; I find a story I like and it's not finished and fjsak I wanna know what happens next.

Love your story, it's, well, awesome. Hope you update soon!

Okay, one day I will go back and review all of the other chapters but now I'm just rushing because I wanna know what happens next. Seriously, what an amazing story! Matt is such an interesting character; he's not static or one-dimensional at all. I love the little hints you give about his home life (or more specifically, his parents). I wanna know what's up with that. I hate Matt and love him at the same time and, I gotta say, he makes me want to keep reading. If it weren't for his character this story wouldn't have had much impact on me.

You have such a way with words and should be proud of yourself, man. The Yaoi part made me lol. I'm gunna read the next chapter. Guess this is a review alert for you, huh?

This is a very interesting and psychological story, in my view. Matt, as a sort of a misanthropist, reminds me of Holden Caulfield from The Catcher in the Rye, but the similarity with the book and the character stops there.

You have a very interesting approach to the subject, with a beautiful boy with destroyed hands, who manages somehow, who (well, to me), seems naive, but when you think better, is he? Small signs he gives Matt, in form of the tone of voice, and now this (not a small sign there :D ), and intentions he has when it comes to Roy that we don't know about. A deep veil of mystery.

And a good-natured Roy, who still has flaws, like watching porn (is that considered a flaw? It's certainly a shocking revelation to those who idealize him, like Matt does).

And Matt, frustrated by his surroundings, scrutinizing everything and everyone, criticizing them, and finally coming to hate himself. His sarcasm and occasional humor. Brilliant.

Your story has some depth to it. The only flaw that I found so far is that this story hasn't been updated in a year, and I'm dying out of curiosity. I'd like to know if you dropped the story or not. It is such a waste to leave it like this.

Sorry for the long review, anyway. I felt like expressing my opinion.

Yours truly

Yaoi-sama