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| half-sketched.staccatos 2007-05-27 ch 1,   | konichiwa I didn't think of this as a mocking sort of poem. This was very meaningful, and I liked it a lot! "Black is but a darker white/as white is just a lighter black" -> That was cute; it made me laugh a bit. "And everything you ever take/will always be taken back" -> How true ... I liked this line a lot. =) "Truth is but a better lie" -> This part reminded me of the first lines I mentioned. It was (fill in a good adjective here). O-daijini -Shan- |
| staras 2007-04-09 ch 1, | I love this, it has a great rhythm to it and I think a lot of people I know should hear it, though I doubt much good would come from doing so, as most of them are beyond any form of enlightenment. Anyway, thanks for the all of the reviews you've given me, I've meant to get on here for a long while but I just never have the time to anymore, what with the tragedy of my computer's death..-Amy |