WOW wut happened to the rest? id LOVE to read some more this is a great idea! Love how u put all of the stories together! PLZ WRITE MORE?!

I just finished reading Deerskin, by Robin McKinley, which is a rather dark version of this fairytale. Nonetheless, I rather liked this because I love fairytales AND slash. :D I hope you update soon.

Whats next, whats next?

"Then maids started wondering about" wandering

"I repented to my sisters’ wishes"
repent 1: to cause to feel regret or contrition 2: to feel sorrow, regret, or contrition for

Maybe acquiesced : to accept, comply, or submit tacitly or passively

"trying to hide chest," hide her chest

"I had noone." no one or, perhaps, none

"for thirteen days for two week." thirteen days out of every two weeks?

This isn't about your story so much as the story it's based on, but who serves the partygoers (helps them dress, etc.) if the staff has the day off.

"Your hips are to narrow and your chest to flat." too

If a story makes sense without a scene, be it love scene, or something else, then it isn't necessary and should be left out.

On the third night of the ball you fall in and out of present tense.

I enjoyed reading it, although All-kinds-of-fur (Deerskin, Donkeyskin, etc. or the Molester King as I call them) is one of my least favorite fairy tale types. The first part is why too close to what I lived through.

Good job.

Could we have at least one male character that is really, really, gay? like flamboyant gay?? 'cause those stories are the best!!
Great Job with this story, i've never heard of this fairy tale...
I'm definatly putting an alert on this one, post the next one soon!!
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I really liked this first story. I like how you wrote it, even though I felt horrible for Nathaniel most of the story. I'd love to read more, so I hope you decide to update this!

These fairytale adaptations are really cool! Keep it up.

Hey, I love this! I can't wait to read the next fairy tale, update soon! :D

Seriously I just fell in love with your story.
Even though its based off of a fairy tale, I like to read fairy based stories the most. You gave it life, and I really hope you will update, because your writing is very inspiring! At least to me it is. Please consider it...thank you.

I read this fic a while back, and I forgot if I had reviewed or not. It seems that I hadn't added it to favs and story alert, so I'm very fortunate to have been able to find it again.

I love fairytales, and I love yaoi too. If you mix those two in a fic... I'm in love!!

This is pretty interesting. I like twisted fairy tales, they're fun to read. ^^ Btw, is your x scene very explicit? Because I've read plenty of hot steamy scenes on FictionPress, so unless yours is strongly graphic, I think you shouldn't cut it, you know. It's still (an important) part of the story.

Keep it up and update soon. Thank you. =)

I liked the story it was very good, but the ending seemed a little sudden for me, but It was still good. Can't wait to see the other fairy tales!

Wow, I've always liked fairytales. Not the cliche, overly loving Disney ones, mind you, but the cruel, harsh ones from which the originate. And I believe yours are a nice combination. And it has slash, which is always a pluc. ;D I really love this and I hope you update soon! I can't wait to read more.

I love the novel and unique take you're putting forth on old fairy tales. Keep it up! I can hardly wait for the next one!

I like the idea behind these stories and I liked the first one.