The final couplet there, is absolutely brilliant.

This was kind of good, actually, although I thought you could have revised it a bit in terms of rhythm. The poem itself is nice, but a more structured rhythm would have given it a Shakespearean quality.

That being said, I found "You are forever hated to the bone" to be kind of an awkward phrase.

Perfect title, by the way. It suits the poem in a way that isn't clichéd or unimaginative.

a bittersweet indeed,nice flow...way to go