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| fantasy4luvr 2007-10-22 ch 9,   | update soon pls. im in love with your story |
| hopelessromantic444 2007-08-25 ch 9, | aw that was such a good chapter! dominic's in love with her that's so cute! |
| hopelessromantic444 2007-08-18 ch 8, | aw didn't really hear much about laila and dominic! they're so cute together! |
| hopelessromantic444 2007-05-06 ch 7, | aw ricky's such a cutie! and so is dominic! |
| LachelleMarie 2007-05-06 ch 7, | I feel bad for Ricky he seems to be one of the nicer characters yet he has to be a prostitue :( oh well. Update soon! |
| BabyImBadNews 2007-04-19 ch 6, | i love it. portrays highschool girls very well. can't wait to read more. |
| yourroyalqueenrandom 2007-04-18 ch 6, | Oh here we go with the cat fight. I liked it a lot. Even though the females annoy me, it's interesting to read their interactions. Good work and I hope to see an update soon. :) |
| hopelessromantic444 2007-04-17 ch 6, | OH WAR EH. lol i like the cassie/aden pairing =D |
| wee-rebz 2007-04-02 ch 5, | o sarah was a bit slutty...opening her legs indeed!! it's funny how girls who are so bitchy get so wound up over guys...i guess that's their weak point! Laila seems nicer than the others, tho still pretty shallow. good work :) looking forward to reading more and seeing the pics! rebzx |
| hopelessromantic444 2007-04-01 ch 5, | love this story so far!! hahaha i love that some of them are bitchy and aren't afraid to hide it =D |
| yourroyalqueenrandom 2007-03-31 ch 4, | Hi there. :) First I want to thank you for your review. Much appreciated. :). I really like this. It's interesting and it's like watching a teen flick. A good one mind you. It's weird so far I can't stand Cassia, Rasia, or Laila, but I'm already in love with Aden, Ricky, and Dominic. lol. I like the the flip side of your story. Instead of the typical loner/outcast view, you give the reader the other side,kudos for originality. It's a good read and I'm looking forward to see how this all plays out. Update soon and good work. Cheers! |
| wee-rebz 2007-03-31 ch 4, | interesting!! so the girls are all quite...nasty so far...and the guys have been sorta decent...which is an interesting way to look at it. but often superficially the girls are nasty and the guys are nice, but when you delve deeper...things are a bit different - like with dominic in the chapter about the older woman...!! i like how you're doing this, and will be interested to see where it leads! your writing style is also great. tried to go see your pics but wasnt working for some reason, so maybe another day. Rebzx ps any reviews of my story 'things you should never write about' are appreciated if you've time. thanks! |
| Uninvited 2007-03-31 ch 3, | I think the story is good so far. I like the way you describe the characters. update soon |
| The Jynx of Kari 2007-03-29 ch 1, | Nice hook. Like the straight down to earth language. Can't wait to see where this goes.__Kari |