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| Wilkem18 2007-04-17 ch 1, | abuseactually, it was filmed and it was a hillarious play. Glad you all like it. |
| MonsterMan865 2007-04-03 ch 1, | abuseIt was good, there were some extremely random parts which will probably work when it is acted at but don't translate well to page. I hope you get a chance to perform it because performing your personal show is the best feeling ever. Good luck- The Monster |
| leighala 2007-04-01 ch 1, | abuseHaha, this is hilarious...well written... I would totally freak if i was fred :S the dentist was completely cool! (the mad dentist) ... haha, ill lok out for ur other works ^^ SkY |
| Ski Aer 2007-03-31 ch 1, | abuseYes, it is sort of funny at some places, I like the UPS guy. ^^ It would be nicer to see it actually, since its written as a play, I don't suppose that you've taped it? |