Reviews for Raining Night - FictionPress.com

Dust by Dawn 2007-04-07 ch 1,	ok well. Have You...? is awesome but needs to be a song. so like i told dani with hers. start working on the compossingness =D. please! =D jjust keep breathing. vry good. wonder if ur refering to anyone in particular ::cough:: ::cough:: futile promise is short but my fav. deep love
mizu no kokoro 2007-03-30 ch 1,	writing is a great way to express your feelings, and this was well written. good work keep writing
Dani P 2007-03-30 ch 1,	aw you can't stop breathing ryan lovers you too much :P (sry had to get you back somehow) good poem though.
ArwenFairTinuviel 2007-03-30 ch 1,	that is so sad and so sweet! I really understand where you're coming from and I can empathise with your pain... such beautiful poem(s) they fit perfectly as one. xx
gold against the soul 2007-03-29 ch 1,	Lovely use of rhetorical questions. This is obviously heartfelt, and I empathise with your situation. Some of your imagery is familiar but well-placed. An effective, emotional write. Good job! - gold against the soul