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| DiaRose 2007-04-23 ch 1,   | It’s nice, but the flow is a bit forced. Perhaps you should try giving yourself some room to not rhyme, like only rhyming every other line or something, because there are quite a few parts that seem like maybe you just included them because they rhyme. It’s good, though, keep it up. |